Merm-8 Final Revision Started

Ah, yes, the final revision.  The story's all made, and now I'm looking for those niggly little bits of punctation and foul-sounding word choices.  I'm also using Natural Reader software so I can have the story read to me.  By an monotone computerized voice.  This will help me find missing words and things that I can't catch while reading, like sentences that sound good in my head but may fall flat to someone else reading.  

Yep, gotta shine up the manuscript, get working on the query letter and then onward.  To GLORY!